My Terrible Novel Opening

For the last lesson we had to create the opening of a novel by using as many stereotypes as possible in order to make it “terrible” and here is mine for a romance novel. Enjoy!

I tossed my long blonde hair around my shoulders flirtatiously, giggling like a young schoolgirl would. I stared into his deep brown eyes, feeling something grow inside me, a feeling of love. A love so strong I felt my knees go weak. I collapsed against him, he wrapped his large arms around me holding me tight, he cleared his throat “you’re standing on my toe” he murmured against my hair, “oh” I replied, he helped me right myself again and we continued gazing into each others eyes, as if we were the only two pairs of eyes left in the universe.

Thank you for reading, comment if you have any feedback!

Katherine =)

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